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第三部分写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

【答案】

1.how改为what 2.chose改为choose 3.take改为taking4.but改为and 5.about后加the

6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为should

9.thought改为think 10.many改为much

【解析】

试题分析：考查记叙文，“我”和同学们对暑假的旅游计划的讨论。

1.how改为what 考查特殊结构。“特殊疑问词+to do”在本句中作为短语talk about的宾语，其中what还要作为动词do的逻辑宾语。句意：同学们和我在谈论暑假期间做什么。

2.chose改为choose 考查句中结构。“情态动词+动词原形”才可以在句中作为谓语部分，而本句中chose是过去式。

3.take改为taking 考查并列结构。本句中动名词短语staying at home与taking a trip构成并列关系，都作为介词between的宾语。

4.but改为and 考查连词。句意：如果我们待在家里，很舒服也没有必要花钱。上下文之间是并列关系，而不是转折关系，所以使用and连接上下文。

5.about后加the 考查定冠词。在英语中定冠词the通常表示特指，本句中the修饰world表示特指这个世界。

6.your改为our 考查代词。应该使用our与本句的主语we保持一致。句意：如果我们出国旅游，我们就拓宽视野并学到书本上学不到的知识。

10.many改为much 考查代词。本句中代词much代替不可数名词much money作为动词cost的宾语，而many通常代替可数名词复数形式。

考点：考查短文改错

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1．主题：环境保护；

2．展览时间；

3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June

15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you

take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Lihua

考点：考查半开放作文

2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试

英语答案及评分参考

第一部分：

1.A 2. B 3. D 4. C 5. A

6. D 7. B 8. A 9. B 10. A

11. C 12. D 13. D 14. C 15. C

16. F 17. A 18. E 19. C 20. G

第二部分：

21. D 22. A 23. B 24. C 25. A

26. D 27. A 28. A 29. C 30. D

31. A 32. B 33. B 34. C 25. C

36. D 37. D 38. B 39. C 40. B

41. greater 42. achievement 43. is 44. on 45. as

46. studies 47. regularly 48. a 49. to bring 50. make

第三部分：

第一节：

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can

what

chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend

choose taking and

money. But in that case, we will learn little about∧ world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view

the our

and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I

knowledge can或should

thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

think much

第二节：

一、评分原则

1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3．词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4．评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。

5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6．如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1．举办者；

2．展览主题及时间；

3．邀请对方提供作品；

4．投稿邮箱。

三、One Possible Version

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you should me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good change for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

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