For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union. You should write at least 120 words following outline given below in Chinese:
1． 你认为自己具备了什么条件（能力、性格、爱好等）可以胜任学生会主席的工作。
2． 如果当选，你将为本校同学做些什么。
这样的内容其实对大家的要求并不高，只要将自己介绍给大家并谈谈对今后工作的打算就可以了。但从考试后同学的反馈来看，有些基础较差的同学完成得并不理想。即使是作为“范文”挂在网上的下面这篇文章（应该是某位考生考试结束以后自我感觉良好放到网上的）其实也仍然存在一些问题：
(1)Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union. (2)I am junior in Chemical Department. (3)Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class. (4)I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise. (5)I am good at communication and organizing. (6)And I like to help others. (7)Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc. (8)I am sure that I am qualified for this position. (9)If I become the president, I will try my best to do well. (10)I will organize some suitable activities for you. （11）I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well. (12)I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president. (13)Thank you.
作为文章或演讲辞，首先应该有文章的样子：开头、主体、结尾。而上面这篇文章只有一段。这首先给阅卷教师一个很不好的印象。一段的文章一般很难有及格的可能；两段的文章一般很难高于9分。这次作文的提纲和以往不少考试作文提纲一样是两段。但我们完全可以先安排一个简短的开场白作为引言段；然后再根据提纲要求写出两段作为主体（一段自我介绍；一段今后打算）和结尾（对听众的感谢）。
其次，这篇文章的内容安排和深度也存在问题：作者只是简单地根据提纲提示介绍了自己的能力（Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class. I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise.）、性格（I am good at communication and organizing. And I like to help others.）、爱好（Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.）。为了使文章的中心更加突出，写作时（尤其是作文考试时）我们需要写出醒目的中心思想句(Topic Sentence)。如这部分的中心思想句可以这样写来：I know that I will be qualified for the future job. I gain the confidence from my past experience and from my knowledge of my own personality。主题句之后应该紧接着扩展句：First of all, I have always been monitor of my class ever since I came into this university. In this post, I have done a great deal for my classmates。这是证明中心思想句的第一个分支观点。为了证明这个分支观点，我们需要更加详细的论据和细节：比如arrange for a trip to Hangzhou, the most beautiful city in China; find out students from poverty-stricken areas and help them overcome difficulty with donation。在这些细节之后再通过别人的赞美来证明自己工作的成就：For the wonderful job I have done and great contribution I have made, I have been often praised by both my classmates and my teacher。同样，后面写自己的性格和爱好时也应该用具体的论据（事实、数据等）。这样文章就条理清晰、论证充分了。
再次，这篇文章有些明显的语言错误，如“reach your demands”应该为 “meet your demands”； “I am sincerely hope” 应为 “I sincerely hope”。 另外下面这句：Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc. 一般情况下，for example之后应为对前面综述的具体举例，但basketball, football, pingpong并不是兴趣，而只是一些球。尽管读者也知道这些指的就是作者兴趣所在，严谨起见，还是应该说: for example, playing basketball, football, pingpong.
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