| There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm to Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing ) Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词 第五段：As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do强调 Positive替换important / good等 A slice of替换a part of Unfavorable替换bad Impacts替换effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage ) Facet替换aspect 各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！ 以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。 1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many, if not most)代替many. 注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing 8: shared代common 9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. eg. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly 13..benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer 15.exceedingly,extremely代替very 16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...代替necessary, inevitable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in 18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention. 19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause. & （责任编辑：） 编辑推荐
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