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directions:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic losing and gaining weight according to the following.your composition should be less than 120 words.remember that the contents of the outline should all be included in your composition.
outline:
the comparison of one‘s body to a car： the similarities and differences of one’s body and one‘s car.
1the ways for gaining weight and losing weight.
2my own practices.
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losing and gaining weight
the process of gaining or losing weight can be explained by comparing your car. first， your car can‘t run if there is no petrol or diesel oil. because it needs energy. the same thing happens to your body. your body also needs energy， the food you eat can be converted into energy，with which you can run， you can talk， you can do everything. second， if you eat too much you will gain weight. we know a car with too heavy load cant run quickly and safely. maybe it will break down. for the same reason， if you are too fat， it is also very inconvenient and dangerous. you might get heart disease，diabetes， and hypertension and so on. if such things happen， doctor would ask you to lose weight.
you eat too much and you don't take exercise， youll gain weight. so if you want to lose weight you have to do the opposite. you will be on a diet. you will go out and do some exercises， such as， running， swimming， and playing football，etc. soon， youll be back in good condition and good shape again.
as far as i am concerned， i get up and go to bed early， do plenty of exercises everyday， and pay special attention to the food i eat as well. i dont eat too much meat. instead， my diet consists of vegetables， fruits， eggs， fish， and beans. by doing this i can keep fit.
作者在这篇文章中先用比较对比法比较了人与车之间的相似之处：车需要汽油，人需要食物；车载的重物过多跑不快，人长得太胖既行动不便也存有隐患，因而过于肥胖 的人就需要减肥。第一段的最后一句话起了承上启下的作用。接下来作者谈了如何减肥，最后很自然地过渡到作者自己的做法。
第三节关键词作文
关键词作文是根据作文题目以及所给出的关键词写短文。关键词的数目由几个到十几个不等。写这种题型的作文，要特别注意关键词的作用。关键词是短文内容发展的“路标”，在作文思路和写作内容上起着决定乾坤的作用。因此，写出的文章要把所给的这些关键词都用上，可以一句中用上几个词，也可以几句中用上一个词，只要能做到恰到好处即可。而且，要学会根据所给关键词的语义群分段。如果所给的关键词可以分为三组，那么，短文就可以写成三段。如果给出的关键词是两组，短文就可以写为两段。再者，要把给出的关键词用在刀刃上，即各段的主题句以及结尾的主题句都应该有关键词。
[例1]directions： for this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on “the advantages of travel” based on the words and phrases given： advantages widen our knowledge， make friends， knowledge or geography，beautiful scenery， different lifestyle， customs and cultures， various foods，practice a foreign language，worth spending the time.
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the advantages of travel
whenever a college student is asked“what are you going to do this summer vacation？”the most probable answer might be“i am going to have a trip.”it seems that college students are fond of traveling very much. why？because travel has numerous advantages.
first of all,travel can widen our knowledge of geography,the knowledge of different customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries. secondly, we can make friends and practice a foreign language through traveling. finally, travel is the best way of spending time. we can enjoy eating various local foods and seeing beautiful scenery.
in a word, we can benefit from travel in more than one way. it is worth spending the time.
作者在第一段中就用上了关键词travel和advantage，并很巧妙地利用because travel has numerous advantages这样的承上启下的句子来引出下文关于旅游的种种好处。最后又把关键词用在了文章的结尾处，强化了主题，不失为画龙点睛之笔。
[例2]directions： for this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a passage on“the helpful features of textbooks” based on the following words given： textbooks， school， levels， kids， purpose， learn， therefore， features，information， contentsts，page， understand， divide， sections， finally， alphabetical， mast， help， quickly， efficiently.
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the helpful features of textbooks
textbooks are books that students use in schools. students at all levels and in all kinds of schools use textbooks. they have certain features in common—features that can help students find and understand the information in them.
all textbooks have tables of contents at the beginning. the tables of contents list the chapter titles， the parts of the chapters，and the page numbers of the parts. these sections are divided again into smaller parts with headings and subheadings. finally， most textbooks have an index at the back of the book. the index lists all the topics in the book in alphabetical order， and gives their page numbers.
these are the features of most textbooks, which help students find and understand the information in textbooks quickly and efficiently.
文章一开头用定义法给教材下了个定义。接下来具体说明教材的主要特征。最后一段与第一段相呼应，并重复和强调了几个关键词中的关键词，比如textbooks，information等。
第四节图表作文
图表作文要求考生用文字材料把图表中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。在写作图表作文时，首先要仔细观察并分析图表，以及题中所给出的有关信息，比如，作文题，英文提纲、英文提示、英语关键词等。在分析图表时，要抓住与主题有关的信息，要发现数据呈现的规律，要充分利用图表中的图形、数据等去说明主题。但是注意不要过多地引用数据，以免造成滥用数据的后果。另外，在写作图表作文时可以套用一些常用词汇或表达方式，这将有助于你写出较为地道的图表作文。例如：
①as can be seen from the table （graph， form） that……
②from the above table it can be seen （concluded） that……
③a careful study of the table shows that……
④the number （percentage） is 3 times as much as that in 2000.
⑤it has decreased （fell， dropped） about twice， compared with （as compared with， as against） that of 2000.
⑥in 2001， it increased （went up， rose） from 5 to 15 percent of the total （to 15 percent， by 15 percent）。
[例1]directions： for this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on changes in people‘s diet. study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. write three paragraphs to：
1. state the changes in people‘s diet（饮食）in the past five years
2. give possible reasons for the changes
3. draw your own conclusion
you should quote as few figures as possible.
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