成人英语三级

The people attacked the practice of making great profits out of college sports from the fact that it had a detrimental influence on college students.

The people attacked commercialisation of college sports as detrimental to students.

怎样使篇章简短，笔调清新，是件说来话长的事，容后再谈。这里只提出一样使句子简短生动的方法；那就是多多利用状态副词（Adverbs of Manner）以取代状态副词短语（Adverb Phrases of Manner）。

试比较下列六组句子：①a—⑥a各有个状态副词短语；①b—⑥b各有个状态副词（即有-ly的副词）。

①a. As an enthusiastic reader， Peter read many books without paying attention to their differences in quality or subject matter.

b. As an enthusiastic reader， Peter read many books indiscriminately（不作选择地）

②a. Good staff performed their tasks with great care and strong sense of responsibility.

b. Good staff performed their tasks conscientiously.（诚心诚意地）

③a. A cheque of  million dollars was sent to the Kidney Research Centre without indicating the name of the donor.

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